06-02-2011, 05:57 AM
at first i wasn't keen on the first line
but after a couple more reads found it perfect.
love the last two lines. the feeling of depression
one gets is solid and given in an original way.
the fear also looms large. reading it is a little scary
because when you do you feel the negativity.
an excellent write jmo
thanks for the read
but after a couple more reads found it perfect.
love the last two lines. the feeling of depression
one gets is solid and given in an original way.
the fear also looms large. reading it is a little scary
because when you do you feel the negativity.
an excellent write jmo
thanks for the read
