Autumnal Kill.
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tethered means connected i think Smile as in rain touched the cloud and the land at the same time,
tethered also means moored, tied or connected. a boat can be tethered to a quay and a balloon to a wrist.

My feet follow muddy scar tissue makes more sense to say scarred mud down
yeah it does sound a little forced, i had to have ten syls, will see what i can do with it later.

yep t the grammar changes, will do a small edit later,

thanks for teh feedback addy.
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Autumnal Kill. - by billy - 05-28-2011, 05:52 PM
RE: Autumnal Kill. - by heslopian - 05-29-2011, 03:31 AM
RE: Autumnal Kill. - by billy - 05-29-2011, 08:09 AM
RE: Autumnal Kill. - by addy - 05-31-2011, 09:29 AM
RE: Autumnal Kill. - by billy - 05-31-2011, 09:35 AM
RE: Autumnal Kill. - by Leanne - 06-04-2011, 05:34 AM
RE: Autumnal Kill. - by billy - 06-04-2011, 08:37 AM
RE: Autumnal Kill. - by Leanne - 06-04-2011, 08:47 AM
RE: Autumnal Kill. - by billy - 06-04-2011, 08:59 AM
RE: Autumnal Kill. - by billy - 11-04-2018, 01:27 PM



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