05-29-2011, 03:31 AM
This is excellent. I won't give you an in-depth analysis of the form because I don't feel I'm qualified enough. But an originality of expression and above all coherence shone through the form, making it seem as though the structure was at the service of the narrative and not vice versa, which must have been incredibly hard to pull off. Thanks for the read Bilbo.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe