05-21-2011, 02:23 AM
Todd,
Excellent. Thanks for putting the time and effort and effort into this critique. A number of your suggestions resonate with me. I'm letting this and the other comments settle on my bones for a bit.
gratitude,
pete
Excellent. Thanks for putting the time and effort and effort into this critique. A number of your suggestions resonate with me. I'm letting this and the other comments settle on my bones for a bit.
gratitude,
pete

