Two Haitians at the Deathbed
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Todd,
Excellent. Thanks for putting the time and effort and effort into this critique. A number of your suggestions resonate with me. I'm letting this and the other comments settle on my bones for a bit.
gratitude,
pete
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Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-20-2011, 06:44 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by heslopian - 05-20-2011, 06:49 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-20-2011, 08:48 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by billy - 05-20-2011, 10:00 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by addy - 05-20-2011, 10:02 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-20-2011, 10:49 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by billy - 05-20-2011, 04:28 PM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by Todd - 05-21-2011, 01:21 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-21-2011, 02:23 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-24-2011, 10:46 PM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by Todd - 05-25-2011, 01:07 AM



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