Two Haitians at the Deathbed
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hi peter, just give feedback the best way yo can. we're grateful to anyone who does,
almost as much as we are to those who post their poetry. just say what you like and why, and what you think could be changed in your honest opinion. (that.s the way most people critique poetry.) we're always open to other poets points of view. and most important of all, we won't be insulted if you show us something you think needs changing.removing/adding etc.

looking forward to some more of your work.
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Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-20-2011, 06:44 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by heslopian - 05-20-2011, 06:49 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-20-2011, 08:48 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by billy - 05-20-2011, 10:00 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by addy - 05-20-2011, 10:02 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-20-2011, 10:49 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by billy - 05-20-2011, 04:28 PM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by Todd - 05-21-2011, 01:21 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-21-2011, 02:23 AM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-24-2011, 10:46 PM
RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by Todd - 05-25-2011, 01:07 AM



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