Two Haitians at the Deathbed

Two Haitians at the Deathbed

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05-20-2011, 08:48 AM

Heslopian,
Not sure about the adjective... "disturbing"... maybe it inserts me (my feelings) into the poem; and truthfully, the reader doesn't need me.
Thanks for the feedback. I'll sit with your suggestion for a bit.
pete

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Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-20-2011, 06:44 AM

RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by heslopian - 05-20-2011, 06:49 AM

RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-20-2011, 08:48 AM

RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by billy - 05-20-2011, 10:00 AM

RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by addy - 05-20-2011, 10:02 AM

RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-20-2011, 10:49 AM

RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by billy - 05-20-2011, 04:28 PM

RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by Todd - 05-21-2011, 01:21 AM

RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-21-2011, 02:23 AM

RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by peter6 - 05-24-2011, 10:46 PM

RE: Two Haitians at the Deathbed - by Todd - 05-25-2011, 01:07 AM

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