05-14-2011, 03:56 PM
(05-14-2011, 03:45 PM)jadielue Wrote: Young, breathless childrenThanks for the wonderful read jadielue
adorned with gun-powder
burns. Great image, skillfully used.
This perceived civil war Just a very minor nit... why "perceived"?
where limits were endless
and widows were made.
We still wear sackcloth
and grovel though.
"They say that God would visit
Adam in the cool of the night.
Here, it's never been colder."
I love this
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?