a cat poem
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that's what i thought, it just read as though it's the addict.
would 'whose' instead of 'with a'

it feels like it's saying an addict with a house full of pets craps on papers. (in a much better way than i wrote of course) then again it could just be me being picky in which case i'm sorry Sad
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a cat poem - by heslopian - 05-08-2011, 01:04 PM
RE: a cat poem - by addy - 05-08-2011, 02:10 PM
RE: a cat poem - by billy - 05-08-2011, 03:10 PM
RE: a cat poem - by heslopian - 05-09-2011, 12:33 AM
RE: a cat poem - by billy - 05-09-2011, 10:07 AM
RE: a cat poem - by heslopian - 05-09-2011, 10:41 AM
RE: a cat poem - by billy - 05-09-2011, 10:50 AM
RE: a cat poem - by heslopian - 05-09-2011, 10:53 AM
RE: a cat poem - by billy - 05-09-2011, 02:11 PM
RE: a cat poem - by heslopian - 05-10-2011, 12:00 AM



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