"Modesty - 2."

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"Modesty - 2."

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05-08-2011, 01:18 PM

I adore the line about the crescent moon cutting the nights... sharp, cruel elegant. Very nice!

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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"Modesty - 2." - by Ris Yerg - 05-07-2011, 11:21 PM

RE: "Modesty - 2." - by Ris Yerg - 05-08-2011, 02:35 AM

RE: "Modesty - 2." - by addy - 05-08-2011, 01:18 PM

RE: "Modesty - 2." - by Ris Yerg - 05-09-2011, 07:41 PM

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