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In Another Universe
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05-08-2011, 01:13 PM
All the little details put into context made it pretty clear it was a man (the description of their lovemaking, the extra-clandestine air to the affair, the fact that he was surprised that he managed to touch and impregnate his wife, etc), so yes, you successfully implied it Jack
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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RE: In Another Universe - by heslopian - 05-03-2011, 07:26 PM
RE: In Another Universe - by ficosdarkness - 05-04-2011, 09:53 AM
RE: In Another Universe - by billy - 05-04-2011, 10:37 AM
RE: In Another Universe - by heslopian - 05-04-2011, 07:22 PM
RE: In Another Universe - by addy - 05-04-2011, 11:10 AM
RE: In Another Universe - by billy - 05-05-2011, 11:27 AM
RE: In Another Universe - by heslopian - 05-05-2011, 12:12 PM
RE: In Another Universe - by kath3 - 05-06-2011, 02:40 AM
RE: In Another Universe - by addy - 05-08-2011, 01:13 PM
RE: In Another Universe - by heslopian - 05-08-2011, 01:27 PM
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