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"Modesty - 2."

"Modesty - 2."
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05-08-2011, 02:11 AM
(05-07-2011, 11:21 PM)Ris Yerg Wrote:  Behind a cloud's veil
A crescent moon
Unhurriedly cut
A night's throat up.
Behind a closed door
I'm going to cut my own.
Yes. I know.
A modesty
Is my main decoration!
Intense and to the point! I like it!
Thanks for this read R.Y.

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Messages In This Thread
"Modesty - 2." - by Ris Yerg - 05-07-2011, 11:21 PM
RE: "Modesty - 2." - by ficosdarkness - 05-08-2011, 02:11 AM
RE: "Modesty - 2." - by Ris Yerg - 05-08-2011, 02:35 AM
RE: "Modesty - 2." - by addy - 05-08-2011, 01:18 PM
RE: "Modesty - 2." - by Ris Yerg - 05-09-2011, 07:41 PM



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