~Who Will Be Responsible?~

[ficosdarkness]

A poem is akin to a sculpture in that aspect, where the structure and enjambment releases the poem's form and frees it's beauty... letting the lines and curves and spaces of the words carry the readers mind or let it linger like a sculpture would draw the eye. I think you did an amazing job with your edit here

I love that explanation, addy! Thank you for that and for the compliment on my work, you are certainly appreciated. I fear that I may be "working" to hard on something that has come natural for a long time. Although I do feel the need to apply form more often, I've been trying to rope myself in, when maybe I should leave a little play in the rope? Thank you again, Addy!
Sincerely,
fd

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A profound and affecting piece which goes places not many writers would in such a way, so the skill of your craft is accentuated by your bravery.

Jack,

I so love to hear from you on these pieces. Thank you very much.
Sincerely,
fd