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"A chump."

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The Dog's Bollocks.

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05-03-2011, 08:34 AM

Ooh loved this one, the hissing wind and the eager sapling... like a parable, how well it speaks to genuine experience

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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"A chump." - by Ris Yerg - 05-03-2011, 02:23 AM

RE: "A chump." - by billy - 05-03-2011, 05:55 AM

RE: "A chump." - by addy - 05-03-2011, 08:34 AM

RE: "A chump." - by Ris Yerg - 05-03-2011, 02:45 PM

RE: "A chump." - by heslopian - 05-03-2011, 07:32 PM

RE: "A chump." - by Ris Yerg - 05-09-2011, 07:38 PM

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