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~Who Will Be Responsible?~
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05-03-2011, 08:31 AM
A poem is akin to a sculpture in that aspect, where the structure and enjambment releases the poem's form and frees it's beauty... letting the lines and curves and spaces of the words carry the readers mind or let it linger like a sculpture would draw the eye. I think you did an amazing job with your edit here
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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~Who Will Be Responsible?~ - by ficosdarkness - 04-24-2011, 07:53 AM
RE: ~Who Will Be Responsible?~ - by billy - 04-24-2011, 09:04 AM
RE: ~Who Will Be Responsible?~ - by ficosdarkness - 04-24-2011, 09:45 AM
RE: ~Who Will Be Responsible?~ - by billy - 04-24-2011, 10:39 AM
RE: ~Who Will Be Responsible?~ - by ficosdarkness - 04-26-2011, 01:11 AM
RE: ~Who Will Be Responsible?~ - by billy - 05-03-2011, 05:38 AM
RE: ~Who Will Be Responsible?~ - by ficosdarkness - 05-03-2011, 07:37 AM
RE: ~Who Will Be Responsible?~ - by addy - 05-03-2011, 08:31 AM
RE: ~Who Will Be Responsible?~ - by ficosdarkness - 05-03-2011, 01:16 PM
RE: ~Who Will Be Responsible?~ - by heslopian - 05-03-2011, 12:03 PM
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