Love is a sound
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hehe, i love this insight.
though i'm sure that what blind rats express is more instinct than love.
that said it's the idea behind the intent of the words
and that is superbly done. the last two lines
are extremely well written. i wouldn't change a thing jack
you show a physicality of how love really could be blind.
thanks for the read.
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Messages In This Thread
Love is a sound - by heslopian - 05-02-2011, 10:29 AM
RE: Love is a sound - by billy - 05-02-2011, 10:42 AM
RE: Love is a sound - by heslopian - 05-02-2011, 10:46 AM
RE: Love is a sound - by billy - 05-02-2011, 11:46 AM
RE: Love is a sound - by Ris Yerg - 05-02-2011, 06:03 PM
RE: Love is a sound - by heslopian - 05-03-2011, 06:58 AM
RE: Love is a sound - by violet - 06-08-2011, 06:50 PM
RE: Love is a sound - by abu nuwas - 06-08-2011, 07:42 PM



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