The Perils of Death

[billy]

Ah I see. What about just "every time"? Would that work?

i think for me it would be the same.

for me just saying;
intellect and soul. If someone tells you
the butler did it, don't believe them.

works best but that said you are the sculptor who welds the chisel
and its only a nit for me.

i still enjoyed the poem a lot as it is. jmo