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By The Mill.
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04-29-2011, 02:05 PM
Some wonky syntax and quite a lot of run-on sentences here (you can see by the prevalence of phrases broken up in commas) but this is one heck of a beautiful poem. Bravo.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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