04-24-2011, 07:58 PM
i read what linda said (allegedly) about her mother and her in the same bed yes, it's why i wrote the line.
i'll be doing a couple of verses at a time, post them in separate threads and then i'll arrange them in some kind of order
and put the poem up as a whole. thanks for the grammar points i'll use them for a quick edit.
the research shown is just a little i have loads hehe. struggling to decipher what i wrote cos it isn't chronological in places it isn't even legible but i did it like that for a reason. by keeping my notes vague i can put a little more of myself into the piece instead of copying.
anyway jack, thanks for the feedback and the kind words.
i'll be doing a couple of verses at a time, post them in separate threads and then i'll arrange them in some kind of order
and put the poem up as a whole. thanks for the grammar points i'll use them for a quick edit.
the research shown is just a little i have loads hehe. struggling to decipher what i wrote cos it isn't chronological in places it isn't even legible but i did it like that for a reason. by keeping my notes vague i can put a little more of myself into the piece instead of copying.
anyway jack, thanks for the feedback and the kind words.