~Who Will Be Responsible?~

[ficosdarkness]

content -wise; very profound, very excellent, very very good (jmo)
it feels that the poem is about questioning the self and getting an answer we didn't expect.
i really loved it. and i think it's publishable. again jmo.

my nit. for me it needs enjambment. the reader needs a little time to catch breath in order
to follow the poem. that said it's just my opinion and i still think ita very good poem no matter how it's written.
this way it a prose poem with enjambment it's not so much a prose poem.

thanks for a great read fd

Thank you, Billy! As you can see I'm still having problems with punctuation and form, but I'm glad that didn't interfere with the poem itself!