04-23-2011, 08:56 AM
How does the enjambment on the second verse's first line affect the mood of the piece? I'll change that and put "pills" at the start of the following line in a mo anyway as looking back I don't like it.
I must say your comment surprises me. I thought you wouldn't think much of the second piece, and say at the most that it was a good observational poem. Thanks for your kind words Billy
I must say your comment surprises me. I thought you wouldn't think much of the second piece, and say at the most that it was a good observational poem. Thanks for your kind words Billy
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe