04-22-2011, 11:39 AM
billy never used a condom but that's an aside we won't go into.
60 word sentences is almost a record i think
the poem;
i enjoyed it's insights. i do have a nit however. some of the smaller words;
are they necessary?
I.E.;
In the golden age of slasher films,
when characters were required to run
and not just be tortured submissively,
when woods were filled with demented mothers
brandishing machetes, and drowned boys
rising from the dead, sex was the ultimate crime.
just a couple of words in this verse.
and a couple in the last
back to the poem,
i got a laugh out of it. it brings back memories of jamie lee curtis.
i saw most of those kind of films on dvd, but your points stick out as valid even to me (a non aficionado of horror)
thanks for the read
60 word sentences is almost a record i think
the poem;
i enjoyed it's insights. i do have a nit however. some of the smaller words;
are they necessary?
I.E.;
In the golden age of slasher films,
when characters were required to run
and not just be tortured submissively,
when woods were filled with demented mothers
brandishing machetes, and drowned boys
rising from the dead, sex was the ultimate crime.
just a couple of words in this verse.
and a couple in the last
back to the poem,
i got a laugh out of it. it brings back memories of jamie lee curtis.
i saw most of those kind of films on dvd, but your points stick out as valid even to me (a non aficionado of horror)
thanks for the read