04-19-2011, 06:04 AM
During my second breakdown, when I stalked through the fields
behind my old school, night descended like a lid.
I sought refuge with my Nan,
who arranged a taxi then waited at the door.
she and I shared what we thought were secrets.
i think it could be done numerous ways, this is a top of my head one.
is it possible to give the red dress a something more then as in taffeta red dress, or something else again jmo.
that said it really is a nit and an odd cliché never did any harm, thinking about it nan was probably cliché kind of person as all nan's are so the red dress would do her justice
behind my old school, night descended like a lid.
I sought refuge with my Nan,
who arranged a taxi then waited at the door.
she and I shared what we thought were secrets.
i think it could be done numerous ways, this is a top of my head one.
is it possible to give the red dress a something more then as in taffeta red dress, or something else again jmo.
that said it really is a nit and an odd cliché never did any harm, thinking about it nan was probably cliché kind of person as all nan's are so the red dress would do her justice