Secrets

[heslopian]

Thanks for the feedback and the heads up on the mistake (I did mean "own") Billy. I see your point about the red dress, but changing it I feel would be dishonest as she was wearing that in the portrait. Every other feature of those pictures is cliché too, I think. My Nan has a rather safe taste in art
I'll make the cold chicken edit in a mo. That verse needs fewer words anyway, as you said when you mentioned it has fifty-one and no full stops (I'm not sure where I could put those without compromising the syntax; any suggestions?).

Thanks for the kind words Addy. Is the friend who reminds you of the tender in the second verse a very clinical and expressionless person?