04-18-2011, 10:43 AM
(04-17-2011, 10:30 AM)Verbavore Wrote: The rising and rising again, I intended as a contrast to the 'rising and falling' but also a vague reference to global warming by referring to the Noah's flood myth.Ah, very interesting. Another good idea for an already wonderfully layered poem
. I look forward to your rewrite
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?