Checking the Defences

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Checking the Defences

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The Dog's Bollocks.

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04-18-2011, 10:10 AM

The way you turned the levity on its head in this one is expertly done, a controlled devastation. Nice job.

PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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Checking the Defences - by heslopian - 04-15-2011, 09:18 PM

RE: Checking the Defences - by addy - 04-18-2011, 10:10 AM

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