04-17-2011, 11:28 AM
the two lines worked really well Vb
as to the hall mark remark i made, i felt it was so only in the 2nd verse. for me the 1st wasn't
i know from experience that a poem written for a special person will always be a special poem no matter how it is written.
i think it's often the act of writing it that carries all the passion. jmo
as to the hall mark remark i made, i felt it was so only in the 2nd verse. for me the 1st wasn't
i know from experience that a poem written for a special person will always be a special poem no matter how it is written.
i think it's often the act of writing it that carries all the passion. jmo