04-17-2011, 10:30 AM
I'm going to come back to this and edit it properly when I'm done with this semester. Quick responses: billy caught my spelling error in line 5, addy has a point with the strange wording and repetitive -ing, I've got an idea to change that. The rising and rising again, I intended as a contrast to the 'rising and falling' but also a vague reference to global warming by referring to the Noah's flood myth. You guys picked up on the major points, but I like the suggestions.