Checking the Defences
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i was reading it as a decent write and then it went deeper.
the last part made me feel the introspectiveness of someone whose taken advice from
a 'shrink' and after watching frasier thinking WTF
so instead of a light hearted poem it was turned into one with some depth. (from my pov)

thanks for the read jack
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Checking the Defences - by heslopian - 04-15-2011, 09:18 PM
RE: Checking the Defences - by billy - 04-16-2011, 05:24 PM
RE: Checking the Defences - by heslopian - 04-16-2011, 08:17 PM
RE: Checking the Defences - by addy - 04-18-2011, 10:10 AM
RE: Checking the Defences - by heslopian - 04-19-2011, 01:05 PM



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