04-13-2011, 01:55 PM
I think it might be the "in them" which is throwing you off. It does me as well. Do you think it would it work better if I removed them? Yeah I worried about Deidre's specs too. I might change it to something like "grandmother's". Thanks for the kind words and feedback Billy.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

