Pictures of the Dead Poets

[billy]

this is good enough without pictures jack though
i can see that if you shaved berryman he would look a lot like carmen

i keep faltering on this line;
above her spinster’s blouse in them, her smile

for me it feels in need of some grammar somewhere though i'm not a grammar expert hehe.

other than that i thik it excels. not sure if deirdries specs are universal enough for many readers to understand but i do,

thanks for the read.