The Mistress

[Jetz]

Kath3,

Thank you so much for your warm response
and for letting me know the parts you most
enjoyed. It helps me to grow.

Sue
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Billy,

Your critique is warmly accepted. I pondered
the first line long and hard, and where simply
'waiting' would work, it does not convey the depth
that I feel 'hours spent waiting' does. One thing
a mistress must learn to do is wait. Your response
is greatly appreciated !! Thank you.

Sue
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Addy,

I thank you for your take on this piece. You
actually took away from it precisely what I was
trying to capture. "patiently crocheting credible
collusion".......my favorite line as well.
Once again, thank you.

Sue
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Ris Yerg,

I am so glad you enjoyed this poem, and am
pleased to be here to share it. Thanks for the
read and response.

Sue