The Mistress
#4
A sad perspective from a mistress, who isn't painted as a "seductress" here but someone making a life and a home of sorts. Loved the lines "patiently crocheting
credible collusion"... giving a heartbreaking warmth to the deceit. Nicely done.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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The Mistress - by Jetz - 04-08-2011, 03:16 AM
RE: The Mistress - by kath3 - 04-08-2011, 04:11 AM
RE: The Mistress - by billy - 04-08-2011, 05:41 AM
RE: The Mistress - by addy - 04-08-2011, 10:34 AM
RE: The Mistress - by Ris Yerg - 04-08-2011, 07:54 PM
RE: The Mistress - by Jetz - 04-09-2011, 01:11 AM



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