Shortly After My Heart Attack
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(03-29-2011, 01:57 PM)addy Wrote:  The only thing I can see is I think the misspelling of "unscratchable".
Now why didn't I notice that while I was bitching about a lower case "I" and no comma after the first line? Man I'm a dullard sometimesDodgy

"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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Shortly After My Heart Attack - by billy - 03-27-2011, 05:59 PM
RE: Shortly After My Heart Attack - by heslopian - 03-27-2011, 06:31 PM
RE: Shortly After My Heart Attack - by billy - 03-28-2011, 05:04 AM
RE: Shortly After My Heart Attack - by addy - 03-29-2011, 01:57 PM
RE: Shortly After My Heart Attack - by heslopian - 03-29-2011, 02:50 PM
RE: Shortly After My Heart Attack - by billy - 03-29-2011, 05:03 PM
RE: Shortly After My Heart Attack - by addy - 03-30-2011, 01:48 PM
RE: Shortly After My Heart Attack - by billy - 03-30-2011, 05:40 PM



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