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The Vultures
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03-28-2011, 11:35 PM
I think I might delete that last line altogether. I really have to break free of this stupid habit I have where I ruin a good thing with explanations. Why did you apologise for liking the first six lines of the second stanza?
Thanks for the kind words and feedback 
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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RE: The Vultures - by billy - 03-28-2011, 09:59 PM
RE: The Vultures - by heslopian - 03-28-2011, 11:35 PM
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