Sexuality

[billy]

Sex is like a messy creche. is like needed?
No matter how many toys you pick up,
despite wading through piles of diapers,
throwing blocks and spare ragdolls
into plastic containers,
you'll never see the floor again
(or not in its entirety).
How long have I yearned to discover the touch
of a woman pleases me? would please work better, as is it feels a bit off
How often have I wanted to take a dear friend,
trusted female, but never quite managed
to become excited? I prefer women.
Just not in the sack.

can't see anything as such that doesn't work for me in this short piece jack
i feel a hint of sadness in the last few lines . maybe it's the dichotomy one faces in such a position. the analogy/simile works well