it's doesn't say a lot, it's not in yer face so to speak and it really does
nothing more than compare how the bbc treat interviews in the usa
and the uk. but i wouldn't change a thing. for me it's a really good
observational poem. the juxtapose of the yanks with shropshire and
the sensible type was perfect.
no in depth feedback as such as i can't see anything i wouldn't keep.
some great lines the 4th verse is such an example of some. good image
with the grass and the vatican
many more dotted through out the poem,
night write.
thanks for the read jmo
i like the bad moron spelling hehe
nothing more than compare how the bbc treat interviews in the usa
and the uk. but i wouldn't change a thing. for me it's a really good
observational poem. the juxtapose of the yanks with shropshire and
the sensible type was perfect.
no in depth feedback as such as i can't see anything i wouldn't keep.
some great lines the 4th verse is such an example of some. good image
with the grass and the vatican
many more dotted through out the poem,
night write.
thanks for the read jmo
i like the bad moron spelling hehe