03-25-2011, 01:13 PM
Good execution of alternate rhyme patterns. addy is right, it is reminiscent of the limerick, with the same attitute.
I absolutely love the last line/ aside! It puts the rest of the poem into a more somber/ fatalistic perspective and contrasts very well with tone of the rest.
I absolutely love the last line/ aside! It puts the rest of the poem into a more somber/ fatalistic perspective and contrasts very well with tone of the rest.