03-23-2011, 07:20 PM
Fantastic. This may very well be my favorite one of yours Jack. It was a great opening and it just rolls from there, each line a gem("torturing primates to reveal love's kernel //inside its apple // of empty gestures" may be one of the saddest picturesque things I've ever read).
Thank you for sharing this. And thank you for sharing that great reading!
Thank you for sharing this. And thank you for sharing that great reading!
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?