03-24-2011, 02:52 AM
i enjoyed the read jack.
makes me think of war wasn't too keen on the heaven line as it feels a bit too cute...though i got the intent.
in fact the more i read it the more i enjoy it. for me the poem ends on the hatpin line which is excellent
makes me think of war wasn't too keen on the heaven line as it feels a bit too cute...though i got the intent.
in fact the more i read it the more i enjoy it. for me the poem ends on the hatpin line which is excellent