"Stunning night."
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I really liked this one, the silly nonsense in it made me grin and cheered me up immensely. Just needs a little correction. In line four, replace either "admire" or "admiration" because using both in the same line is redundant. Also, I think its grammatically correct to drop the "the" in the last line.

Thanks for the read Smile
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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Messages In This Thread
"Stunning night." - by Ris Yerg - 03-23-2011, 03:27 AM
RE: "Stunning night." - by addy - 03-23-2011, 06:57 PM
RE: "Stunning night." - by Ris Yerg - 03-23-2011, 07:18 PM
RE: "Stunning night." - by billy - 03-24-2011, 02:47 AM
RE: "Stunning night." - by Ris Yerg - 03-24-2011, 04:41 PM



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