03-22-2011, 05:35 PM
I knew you'd call the second verse cliche
It's the rose blooming right? I kind of stole "whitens my bones" from the poem Wuthering Heights by Sylvia Plath, who talks about heather doing that.
Thanks for your feedback Billy.
It's the rose blooming right? I kind of stole "whitens my bones" from the poem Wuthering Heights by Sylvia Plath, who talks about heather doing that.Thanks for your feedback Billy.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe