03-14-2011, 09:02 AM
Looking back the second verse was written due to the knee jerk explanations of what my poems mean which I'm often tempted by. You're right, it doesn't add anything and I'll delete it in a mo. Thanks for the feedback and kind words Billy.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe