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(content warning) Blue Movie
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03-13-2011, 08:02 AM
i think the title change would work,
what would a would be director do?

i think; as he feeds the actors their love play

gives too much away and feels a bit long
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(content warning) Blue Movie - by heslopian - 03-11-2011, 01:12 PM
RE: (content warning) Watching a Movie - by billy - 03-12-2011, 12:26 PM
RE: (content warning) Watching a Movie - by billy - 03-13-2011, 07:15 AM
RE: (content warning) Blue Movie - by billy - 03-13-2011, 08:02 AM
RE: (content warning) Blue Movie - by heslopian - 03-13-2011, 08:18 AM
RE: (content warning) Blue Movie - by billy - 03-13-2011, 12:44 PM
RE: (content warning) Blue Movie - by heslopian - 03-13-2011, 12:51 PM



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