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(content warning) Blue Movie
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03-13-2011, 07:36 AM
Thanks for the feedback and kind words Billy. My original title was just "Blue Movie", so I think I'll change it to that. Instead of "as he tells the actors what to do" would "as he feeds the actors their love play" be a stronger line? I'll make the other change you recommended in a mo.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe
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(content warning) Blue Movie - by heslopian - 03-11-2011, 01:12 PM
RE: (content warning) Watching a Movie - by billy - 03-12-2011, 12:26 PM
RE: (content warning) Watching a Movie - by heslopian - 03-12-2011, 01:11 PM
RE: (content warning) Watching a Movie - by billy - 03-13-2011, 07:15 AM
RE: (content warning) Watching a Movie - by heslopian - 03-13-2011, 07:36 AM
RE: (content warning) Blue Movie - by billy - 03-13-2011, 08:02 AM
RE: (content warning) Blue Movie - by heslopian - 03-13-2011, 08:18 AM
RE: (content warning) Blue Movie - by billy - 03-13-2011, 12:44 PM
RE: (content warning) Blue Movie - by heslopian - 03-13-2011, 12:51 PM
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