03-13-2011, 06:59 AM
(03-12-2011, 09:29 PM)kath3 Wrote: Loved it. Thank you.comment on someone else's feedback is a no no here and oft frowned at kath.
stillness like a gnome in an empty garden I hope you keep this line which is one of my favorite ... lonely and forgotten
I also liked the multiple use of and which for me extended the endlessness of death (if that makes any sense ... I suck at explaining.)
never the less i shall be a very bad boy.
feedback needs no explanations, so you're okay on that score. and the explanation you gave was great anyway. just carry on doing what you're doing and you'll be good go
the feedback is all about you and the poem and nothing else. the feedback you gave was a perfect example of that.