03-12-2011, 09:29 PM
Loved it. Thank you.
stillness like a gnome in an empty garden I hope you keep this line which is one of my favorite ... lonely and forgotten
I also liked the multiple use of and which for me extended the endlessness of death (if that makes any sense ... I suck at explaining.)
stillness like a gnome in an empty garden I hope you keep this line which is one of my favorite ... lonely and forgotten
I also liked the multiple use of and which for me extended the endlessness of death (if that makes any sense ... I suck at explaining.)
You give to the world when you're giving your best to somebody else.