03-09-2011, 09:24 AM
I feel my critique would be better informed if I knew who Herrick was, and if I read "Daffodils" again (I don't think I've looked at it since high school)
For the record though, I think you should make it more modern.
For the record though, I think you should make it more modern.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe

