03-09-2011, 06:06 AM
Of course I don't mind. I don't own the patent to couplet poems
Thanks as always for your feedback. I might scrap this poem later and return to the drawing board. I feel it has too much setting and not enough action.
Thanks as always for your feedback. I might scrap this poem later and return to the drawing board. I feel it has too much setting and not enough action.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe