03-08-2011, 10:13 AM
yes .
as for the now. you me we all of us have poetic licence.
leaving out the small words is one way of using it
feminism has been forced onto you,
your corpse re-dressed by radicals,
as though to be a wife was your single purpose,
a deranged Ophelia, unwilling symbol,
maybe you'll never be thought an artist
in the circles you so sought to join.
whats wrong with the above everything that preceded it
led us to whats happening now (of course it's jmo for you to use or discard as you see fit
)
as for the now. you me we all of us have poetic licence.
leaving out the small words is one way of using it
feminism has been forced onto you,
your corpse re-dressed by radicals,
as though to be a wife was your single purpose,
a deranged Ophelia, unwilling symbol,
maybe you'll never be thought an artist
in the circles you so sought to join.
whats wrong with the above everything that preceded it
led us to whats happening now (of course it's jmo for you to use or discard as you see fit
)