03-06-2011, 07:51 AM
You don't like my second line?! I thought it was so clever at the time
But yeah, in hindsight, it doesn't really mean anything much. I see your point about the repetition as well. Thanks for your feedback Billy.
But yeah, in hindsight, it doesn't really mean anything much. I see your point about the repetition as well. Thanks for your feedback Billy.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe